Hey hey yeah you girl, what do I say?

Written for a contest. Inspired by different Led Zeppelin songs. Most about their song, "Hey Hey what can I do?"

Hey babe you sure are got a pretty little face
I can see in your eyes that you lie
I see through my left eye winking at you
That smudged red lipstick all over your tasty lips
Roamin the streets at night
Just to make a quick buck
Damn babe why you gotta stay drunk during the day
The Lord will help you get your act together
Girl, you are too sexy to be out all night
When you are with me we always fight
Lost to many woman due to heroin
But babe I just can’t lose you
I don’t mind your drug filled needle
Since you don’t mind my groovy purple haze pipe
I don’t know what to do about you
You keep me up all night waiting by the phone
When I know you are roamin at my neighbors
You are never alone nor have lonely nights like I do
Just waiting for you jammin on my guitar
Girl you got my head twisted
You a foxy heartbreak
Yeah I see you sucking on that jawbreaker
All I wanna do is bang you and suck on my purple pipe

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you wrote this poem. Like a old rock and roll song pace. So many lines I like in this poem.
"Lost to many woman due to heroin
But babe I just can’t lose you
I don’t mind your drug filled needle
Since you don’t mind my groovy purple haze pipe"
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[SpokenWord]

I am beginning to think that most of us are just broken souls looking for ways to heal. What a damaged relationship but it has it sparkle of intensity and passion at least from the eye of the beholder. Over all I loved this poem it did have an old time rock feel to it. I think you did excellent on this write. I am just glad I am not him in love with a broken soul. Had my fill of that kind of love.

[Jeremy Baker]

I like these poems with a social conscience and comment, and especially the passion with which you wrote it. Great write.

[The old me]

very well written. very good flow.