Chapter five: Excited for school

Chapter five: Excited for school

A Chapter by Ashley

   Sean heads back to his parents apartment and happily tells his parents about Sapphire how cute she is. They seem impressed how much Sean is looking forward to school tomorrow.
Sapphire heads back to her sisters house. She walks in two minutes before her sister comes home. Her sisters Sabina asks, “Hey, how was school?”
“Umm fine, just fine.”
“Do you have to go to work today?”
“No I have today off, tomorrow I’m going straight to work after school.”
“Ok that’s good. So what shall we eat for dinner?”
“I dunno. I’m so happy, I don’t care.”
“The teenager years, aren’t they wonderful. Alright ill make some mac and cheese.”
“CHEEEESEEE”
“Um are you alright Sapphire?”
“Yeah I just enjoy cheese.”
“I can see that.”
They eat dinner with Sabina’s fiancé. Sapphire goes to her room and instead of drawing clouds with lightening bulbs on her notebook. She draws hearts and smiley faces inside the clouds. She sets her alarm early for 6:50 am, so she can get up early to look pretty. Then slowly falls asleep, this time without any tears running down her pretty face.


© 2011 Ashley


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Captures the sense of kinda special feeling that we get, after meeting someone special, captured so well here. Can feel the contentment and excitment that she is feeling and Sean to some extent as well!

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