Baby can't you see how much I miss you?

Baby can't you see how much I miss you?

A Poem by Ashley
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missing people hurts and all that is left are your memories

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I can not stop seeing these visions of us
What we used to be
My memories of us are still strong
Loving each other all the time
I keep pretending you still care about me
Free me from my mind
I am going mentally insane from all the emotional abuse
Of your absence
We can hold each other again, keeping each other warm and tight
I miss you more than a flower missing its petal pieces
Why won't you pick up the phone?
I feel so alone, once again
I am afraid to be on my own
I can not erase you from my broken heart
You not being here is taring my soul apart
The tears in my eyes will always drip
If you keep leaving me with this much pain
This pitiful pain just won't go away
Music and medicine only numbs my feelings for awhile
But when you are here and I see your smile I feel right
I am sick of fighting, I miss you until my heart hurts
Why do you have to be gone for such a long time?
Time seems to be standing still when you are not here
Time seems to be a stealer when you are with me
I feel sadness running through the coarse of my veins when you are not near
I feel a strong vibe and I actually want to be alive when we are together
Please tell me you always think about me, us too
Baby come here we can be happy with only each other
No one else can keep up with you like I do
You and our memories still stay locked in my heart
I discarded the key, so we can always be forever
How can you say you love me
Then leave me?



© 2010 Ashley


Author's Note

Ashley
I hope you liked it and see how I feel.

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You not being here is taring my soul apart
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You not being here is tearing my soul apart

OUT WITH THE EDITING....THIS SOUNDS LIKE A RAP SONG...THE WAY THE LINES JUST COME AT YOU IN THE LINES AND HAS A SENSE OF RHYME AND RHYTHM IN THE WHOLE SCHEME OF THINGS AS THIS PLAYS OUT...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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