Sexy time

haha I felt like writing about sex, this is for mature people only.

I know you and I are meant to be together
Lets only love each other all night long
Not with others, forget about them
I cuddle into your strong arms
Push myself onto you
We are all over the wooden wall
I linger my finger tips all over your body
Baby lets take it easy, medium, then rough
Without you my world is a mess
Put your hands all over my chest
You like to rip my bra off
I like to nibble on you
We never can get enough of only each other
When you are all over my lips
Our heart beats fast and faster
I feel these naughty feelings
Think of these dirty thoughts all the time
I do not feel like I am faking it anymore
We fall onto the floor
I suck on your tongue
It tastes better than sweet candy
You are the sweet sugar in my high
You feel me tingling all over your body, mind, and soul
While throwing each others clothes off
My body speaks a language only you know of
Your love keeps me awake at night
I need you more than water
I think of touching your body too much
You make my whole body blush
Spray the whipped cream
I will pour the chocolate sauce over your neck
Let things get out of control and messy
We share each others feelings
As we twist around inside each other
We do not need the bed
My head feels in a glaze
Our eyes come in contact with each other
I push you in close
You pull me in even closer
You try to talk
So I just say baby we don't need no words
I hear you breath heavy
As I moan in comfort 
Not caring who hears
I bite your lips tasting a wonderful taste
You know my right G-spot
I know which spots
Makes you gasping for another breath

Author's Note

I hoped you liked it ;)

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

This poem has a great subject and I think a great grasp of the topic at hand. You have painted a great picture here, but I think it could be better. I think that there should be breaks between the different groups of lines.

Some of the lines seem rushed and maybe out of place...like it doesn't always have a chronological order. It throws a reader off...it throws me off.

And there were a few lines that were just awkward and maybe just a bit off:

Push myself onto you on the wooden wall

While throwing all each others clothes off

I don't mean to be exceptionally critical, I just wanted to help. I think that you have an incredible talent and this poem could be great!

xxoxx

[Bare trees]

It sounds like a burst of passion has suddenly hit Ashley. I'm surprised to see you writing about such a topic but it feels spontaneous to me from beginning to end. I suppose there could be some line breaks but overall, you certainly didn't hold back did you. Not surprised to see so many reads with only a few comments, people like reading about sex but don't want others to know it. I liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to know pleasure and dance in desire. I believe last real freedom is what we share and do in the private of a bedrooms. I like the pace and the story in the poem. Passion need to be slow and easy to make it last. No weakness in this amazing poem.
Coyote

[Helpless]

very very sexy! amazing!

[quinfinn]

steamy and sensual. that is a very kinky poem and i thank you for kicking me those personal moments. very nicely done! yep, i'm gonna be a nervous wreck before this contest is over with. i gotta feelin' my lady is gonna receive a lot of attention over
the next few weeks. great write!

[Karen666]

pure sexy :)

[Jeff]

Very naughty. ;)

[Caitlynxoxo]

lol HOTTT!! :P it's always nice to change things up a bit, and this was probably fun to write!! It was really good, thanks for sharing!!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo