Bloody Vampires

I wrote this scary/silly poem/story for Halloween. enjoy.

My lovely living forever Vampire Husband
As you bite my neck so I can be like you
My whole body feels sore, I like it
Lips just turned bright brick red color
I bite them to taste a little more blood
I can not get enough of sucking blood
As I grow sharp fangs V_V
My veins turn bright blue
All I see are visions of Monsters
Spirits and ghosts
I try to act normal
No more seeing the reflection of myself in a mirror
I go right back to my night time job, babysitting
As the baby girl parents leave
I have the baby in my hands
I rock, rock, rock her until she sleeps
She sleeps so tightly in her sheets
Her neck looks so delicious
Am I wrong?
Its not like I am chopping her up with an axe, I need to suck on blood
So I can survive, goodnight baby
I dive straight for her little neck
Killing the 2 year old girl
I cry, cry, cry
So my husband comes
When her parents show up
Ghosts appear to fight off evil spirits floating in the air
As the parents are shocked
My husband and I chase them and suck on their blood
Blood fly's everywhere
My husband and I go away to our grave yard
Trying to make our coffin beds comfy again
When I hear a baby scream
A mother yelling
And a father coming back
It was my fault, I forgot after you bit their neck
They are usually not dead just yet
More monsters are after my Vampire butt

Reviews

[EMMIE]

THIS IS SO TWILIGHT-ISH THANKS FOR SUBMITTING FOR THE HORROR CONTEST! AWESOME WRITE!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

When the craving to feed takes you, well written.

[Star Wolf]

Excellent story in this vampire poem. Blood is food so why should a vampire resist? Everything is driven to live and that means eating!

[china]

I love this one, it's very entertaining. You shocked me when you sucked on the baby's neck but then again that's what vampires do! Thumbs up!