You have my heart

I wrote this in a boy perspective instead of a girl, to change it up a little its a letter/poem

Dear Girl,
I am writing this letter/poem to show you how much I care
I want to share my feelings towards you
We have been with each other for a few years now
On and off, off and on
Now I vow to always be true instead of with others
I would appreciate it if you stop seeing another boy toy
And only see me, I know more about you than he ever will
One more thing I want to change about you,
is your last name
Without you I do not even want to breath
You make me feel so alive
Because baby your lips are so smooth
You are sweeter than sugar
I promise to stop smoking cigars
If you just come back home
I just roam our place alone in the night
I miss you, you are too beautiful to be without me
I want to show you how much I truly care
My heart is missing its piece without you
I love it when you go down on me
I feel great when I'm inside of you
But just seeing your joyful face,
reminds me we are in the right place
I hate the space between us
I always only think of you, my boo
Although I have many problems that are stressing me out
You are the only one that makes me feel better than alright
Baby your no mistake, you have to be my only one.
-Love Boy.

Author's Note

I hope you like it.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this is a great poem and letter. It's so cute what the boy is trying to say. This is why it won aww in the contest. Good job.

[Moth Phoenix]

It's a great poem/letter =] keep it up!!

[Jeff]

It's very nice, and even as a letter, it's still poetic.