I miss you

About missing someone, and you wonder if they really miss you too.

        I miss you, us,
I want to hold you closely
Instead of screaming in a dark corner
I want to kiss you, as you kiss away my pain
Instead of walking with my head down
With only my shadow as accompany
I want to cuddle with you in order to fall asleep
Instead of crying a puddle over my pillow every night
I want you to whisper in my ear, everything will be alright
Instead of me wondering my negative thoughts
I want to look into your shiny eyes face to face
Instead of looking back into memories of old pictures...
       Without you my skies are gray, there is no sunshine
I need you near me, but you always seem so far away
I am running out of time and you are still not even mine
I am stuck here just dreaming of you
Each day is so hard to just to try and go on
Can you feel my presence when I think of you, every moment?
I try to go out and forget my emotions
But no matter what I do something somewhere reminds me of you
I go right back into missing and thinking, thinking and missing
This is unfair, the distance makes it hard to breate
What I need is just so far away
I guess I will always be all alone
I just have to get used to this pain
I try to lay down and forget, or take my mind off of you
But how can my heart let go,
when I don't want to be this far away?

Author's Note

please read and tell me what you think

Reviews

[Wolf]

you are in alot of pain and i do see it in your writing i almost thought you where one of my exs when i first read it cause i talked to her a few days ago and this is exactly how she sounded. but its a good write keep it up.

[Brittany W]

Great job on this, i really liked how even thought not all of this rhymed you threw in lines that did, it really helped the poem, you could feel the emotion, once again great job :)

[Star Wolf]

So very sad and so very painful, missing someone this badly always is. Your words here and tender and loving and so full of longing for this other who makes your days a little brighter and more worthwhile.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a tender echo that flows through your thoughts... longing to be with the one you love instead of feeling the pain of the distance.. So far away.. I can relate so well to your words.. Beautiful and bittersweet...

[Jeff]

I love how you formatted this poem. It's really good and the yearning for this person to come back really comes through.