I dont want to answer to you anymore

About a girl leaving a guy. but he doesn't want to let her go.

I want to be alone, far away from you
you should move along, since i did
i used to pretend our relationship was real
i faked it ever since i met you
i feel like i don't even know you
i want to let you go
and not let my true feelings show
i don't want to fight anymore
if my heart stops beating
it wont hurt anymore
i want to leave you
to get up and just go
i want to be by myself
please let me leave
stop following me
i'll just ignore you
how you used to ignore me
ignorance is bliss
i have to fix my issues
that were caused by you
i'll be better, and so will you
goodbye liar, forever.

Author's Note

ignore grammar.

Reviews

[TTBoy28]

Your feelings are clear! Good!

[Brittany W]

I agree that it doesnt flow that great and maybe capitalizing your I's wouldnt hurt, but i like the poem overall. i think if you worked on it a little more a tweaked it up, it could be fantastic, but its not bad, you did a good job.

[bwmorency]

Hm, a little random. The words don't flow as nicely as they could.

I get the message, though.