Where is someone when you need them the most?

Where is someone when you need them the most?

A Poem by Ashley
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Trying to get away from the pain

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I'm dying here
All alone in the scary small corner
Of your green eyes
My heart is crying just for you
Someone, something stop all of this pain
We can't gain anything from each other
Since you have her all over you
And i have my issues all around me
I slowly get up
To break free from the discomforting bubble
To walk alone in the brisk night
Not knowing what direction there is to go
I just want to lay on the floor of my home
But where i am now?
I am lost, once again
Screaming in silence
So much broken pain inside
I just try to look for a place to hide
At the end of the miserable road
Someone get me off my path
How can i pretend to be alright
When everything feels wrong?
I'm waiting for the shinny sun to come up
But mine never does.







© 2010 Ashley


Author's Note

Ashley
if there are any grammar mistakes ignore them. please rate and comment and tell me how much you love it :]

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It was a good tale. I have noticed also that you have an issue with rhyming as well.

The image that you put on the bottom was cool!



Posted 14 Years Ago


its a form of speech

Posted 14 Years Ago


How are you screaming in silence?
The last two lines are my favorite.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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