Track

Track

A Poem by Joshua Lobdell
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I wrote this about the most traumatic breakup of my life, and no it is not about my ex wife but my ex mistress

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She turned her back

Knocked me off my track

Why did she have to go?

I love you babe, don't you know?

Without you I cannot deal

My scars will not heal

I need you here with me

How can I make you see?

That you and I a perfect pair

With the world I want to share

The Love I have for you

Never doubt that it is true

But for now she walks away

Loneliness my price to pay

Now I hope and pray

One day she returns to stay

© 2014 Joshua Lobdell


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Good meter and distributed rhyme. Not over the top emotionally. Short phrases seem to work for you.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 16, 2014
Last Updated on September 19, 2014
Tags: Lea, relationships, breakups, heart break, Joshua Lobdell

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Joshua Lobdell
Joshua Lobdell

Detroit, MI



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My life is kind of complicated…since I seem to attract all these weird complicated relationships and that professionally I have to be two different sides of a very unique coin. On one hand I a.. more..

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