Slow

So lately I have been all about the work I wrote before I got married. Which is stuff I wrote over 10 years ago. I like them cause a lot of them could have be written in the present.

What is love? I want to know

And for her I want to show

In us, I would like to grow

Mend our hearts, oh so slow

We fell for each other fast

Still coping with out past

I wonder will this last?

As our love hardens in its cast

But there is baggage we both carry

Love can be oh so scary

Our history has been so hairy

Are you my Princess, is that a fairy? 

Reviews

[Dylan]

First of all, congratulations on your ebook 'Verses'. Poetry can be extremely personal and individualistic and that is clear in yours. However, the theme of this poem is classic and if there is any suggestion to add, it would be to proofread more carefully, as the second to the last line is somewhat amiss. Other than that it is a good showing.

[livetowrite]

That's a lovely poem. You are very talented x