Candlelight

I wrote this piece after getting out of the hospital and rehab. My life was kind of a mess and I was looking at the choices I had made and what lessons could be learned from them.

By candlelight

I still write 

To ease my mind

Stuck on rewind

See events in my head

The trips I still dread

Back in my past

Try to run away fast

Need to get away

No longer want to play

Every day and every night

right here by candlelight 

Reviews

[Dylan]

This was both concise and introspective considering your introduction and reflective of where you were...good job.

[SyberRose]

Writing by candlelight sounds so lovely...I will have to try it...Enjoyed...Rose:)

[mark]

well done mate.
it was very good to read and very creative and short.
great rhyming too, it was set out nicely.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

You have found your 'safe place' in your writing. Keep it up!