why still? why?

an old memory brought back to me...

Why you again? 

why do you come to me?

what have i done?

I told you that, 

but now my words are stung.

Do what you want to do.

See what you want to see,

play what you want to play, 

day by every f*****g day.

 

Can't you see that don't care anymore? 

Yet you dare to come to me,

and knock on my door. 

I open and you say please, please, please. 

I close it and hope you just leave.

 

You tore me open, 

and that day won't go away. 

It's here to stay in my mind and in my gaze. 

Just leave me alone, 

I don't want to hear you. 

All i feel right now is fear for you.

 

Come near me again and i'll make sure it's your last. 

I won't be nice like I was in the past. 

I took all your s**t, held it down, held it in, 

But I'm all grown up now, do it again, it's a sin.

 

I promise I'll make you hear what i to say, 

I't won't be words, but you'll hear it every night and every day.  

So stay away from me, don't come near me again. 

I'f you do, you'll regret it as soon as you can.

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

I agree with the previous reviewer, it could be very good, the last line falls a little flat, 'as soon as you can'? As soon as they can acknowledge your discomfort, or what? A good rant is a fab way of expelling iritants, especially poetically, it helps us all.

Smiling at you

Tai

[Cherrie Palmer]

this could be a great poem all the elements are there, read it out loud and keep changing words till it's smoothed out and reads like a song.

[J,D]

that was very poorly written im sorry to whoever reads this =/