Blake's Response

Narrator follow-up to previous entry. Be sure to keep up on my fan page for more! https://www.facebook.com/#!/jldyersbook

                I tell ya.  This doesn’t get any easier, watching this town fall apart like it is.  A good part of me still doesn’t wanna believe in vampires.  That said, I’m actually glad I went the way I did.  I sure do not wanna become one of those things nor do I just want my obituary reading that I was found dead with two puncture wounds in my neck.  I dunno.  Just makes it sound like I died like a sissy, ya know?  It’s not like the obits would necessarily read “Blake was killed by a damn vampire!”  It would probably say “Animal attack” or something.  Once again, making me look like a yellow-bellied pansy! 

And where do they get this strength?  Did you see how she manhandled him?  Granted, he wasn’t athletic by any stretch of the mind, but Nigel was a pretty big dude and should have easily gotten himself outta that jam!

 I wish I could touch again, ya know?  So I could find out for myself.  She nor anyone of the other bloodsuckers would  be able to lick me!  Let alone bite!

 Wow… there I go getting ahead of myself again.  Bet you thought Kara and Clarissa were the only ones, huh?  Well I’m not getting that far into it, but rest assured, it gets much uglier.

                But anyways, why Nigel?  Good, damn good kid.  Would give the shirt off of his back to a stranger and if anyone knew that, it would be that b***h Kara.  How do vampires choose their victims, ya know?  I mean if they have to survive on blood, wouldn’t any one person do? Or can’t it be just animals? Or how bout that sonofabitch who set my house on fire and left me to broast? Oh yes, reader ,he’s still out there and I have plenty to yap on about when it comes to him.

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

compelling story. i love this whole concept and how you incorporate witty humor you weaved throughout this story's darkness. great write. thanks for sharing :)

[Hanhil]

I like the protagonist. I do. lol. "..... nor do I just
want my obituary reading that I was found dead with two
puncture wounds in my neck. I dunno. Just makes it sound like I
died like a sissy, ya know?" Thats funny! :-)