"Homeless"

Brief poem... Notice the first letter of each line.

Have you got any change you can spare?

Only got these here clothes I wear.

My home used to be right under there.

Easy to say life's been unfair.

Lonely as I, a friend is rare.

Everyone I know, they don't care.

Steal from a man, I wouldn't dare.

So have you got any change you can spare?

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Lonely as I , a friend is rare...
Nice write.

[Jason Dyer]

Thanks Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome... Any time.

[ms. barrie]

Very poignantly profound, great flow, very well written. thank you for reviewing "nightshade" - take care

[Jason Dyer]

thanks! wrote this in high school and has stuck in memory since.

[Kuhr Gred]

hi.. wow.. i feel the flow of your expression here. . and seems all lines illustrates Life :) ahha,, anyway.. thanks for review in "Tears from the clouds" I really I appreciate it ^^
-Kuhr gred

[Jason Dyer]

thank you!

[Nona]

ohhh :) the structural empire of simplicity and sophistication
I do feel unease and bitterness of homeless-chasm-liness but somehow in a very playfull way :)

[Jason Dyer]

Pretty deep response (almost the length of the poem)! Thanks for reading, Nona!