Colors of the Wind (a poem)

a poem about the true colors of mother nature

Colors of the Wind (a poem)

 

Brightly-lit yellow painted on the face of the sun

As I look up, squinting from the powerful light to see it

 

Rich, baby blue plastered as the sky

Pale, white in the freeform clouds

As my eyes trail across the place above my head, looking like its own city of wonder

 

Dark, ruby red sparkling across the cherry tree

As I pluck one from the leaves of life just to get a small taste of its sweetness

 

Rosy pink flowers sprouting up from the ground

Along with violet violets

Making me want to run wild and get lost in a forest of the colorful stems with buds on top

 

And lively green grass acting as the floor

As I do it all on Earth’s playground

Feeling the full effects as it blows against me

As it is…the colors of the wind

Author's Note

a springtime feeling! let me know what ya think!
(the pic doesn't go too well with it, but it does shows unbelievable colors of Mother Nature)

Reviews

[TadKent]

I disagree with the review below. The dark doesn't always need to be acknowledged. People that constantly address "the dark" part of life are clearly unhappy with themselves, angry at themselves, depressed, or can't find much to live for. Thankfully, not everyone is like that. :) Good piece man, the lovely things in life can be appreciated. Imagery's great, of course. Makes me want to take the girlfriend out.People that have "lived" know that there are great things in life as well.

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

I enjoyed this poem and made me think of spring time here where i live and hearing Creation come alive! Keep up the good work. Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[jessfoundwonder]

Yeah sounds like spring. You're crazy observant and you write about things that I'd overlook. Another nice one!

[Madame Mystique]

hey there :)
I'd make a small change here "Rosy pink flowers sprouting up from the ground
Along with violet violets"
Try using purple violets instead. :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was cute. I really liked this poem. I love the title. Thanks for sharing. :)