I disagree with the review below. The dark doesn't always need to be acknowledged. People that constantly address "the dark" part of life are clearly unhappy with themselves, angry at themselves, depressed, or can't find much to live for. Thankfully, not everyone is like that. :) Good piece man, the lovely things in life can be appreciated. Imagery's great, of course. Makes me want to take the girlfriend out.People that have "lived" know that there are great things in life as well.
Beautiful. I'm a sucker for a good poem about nature, but this is beyond good.
The imagery is amazing.
I feel refreshed after reading this.
Great job. :)
Your words capture the many beautiful colors
Of nature the beauty of the canvas
Fill with flowers greens purples
Earth is a colorful beauty and your perfectly chosen
Words have captured all its beauty of colors and nature
Kudos my friend!!
I got a very 'fresh' feeling when reading this poem... like my subconscious began to look forward for the things to come (even more than usual, anyways). Really captured the rainbow on this one, good stuff - and nice Pocahontas reference, haha.
I disagree with the review below. The dark doesn't always need to be acknowledged. People that constantly address "the dark" part of life are clearly unhappy with themselves, angry at themselves, depressed, or can't find much to live for. Thankfully, not everyone is like that. :) Good piece man, the lovely things in life can be appreciated. Imagery's great, of course. Makes me want to take the girlfriend out.People that have "lived" know that there are great things in life as well.
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