In The Middle (a poem)

a poem about being centered and being the middle of Earth's beauty

In The Middle (a poem)

 

I am standing here

Beside a lonesome tree

In the middle of a beautiful scene

 

The ground is rich in nutrients, nourished by a perfect tone of green grass

Fields of it reaching out miles upon end

 

An eagle flies overhead, letting loose a beautiful cacophony

In the baby blue sky with wispy, white clouds hovering, making shapes of all sorts

 

The sun shines brightly, lighting everything up

Feeding it rich light and sprouting wonderful scenes

 

I can feel the wind brush against my skin, painting it with coolness

It visibly breezes against the tree as well, giving him a little shudder

 

Together we are in the middle

In the middle of all great things that Mother Earth has to offer

Resting in her love and care

Right here

In the middle

Author's Note

this reminds me a lot of The Lovely Bones (book and movie). Let me know what ya think!

p.s. most of my poems are written on the fly. and some of them rhyme and some don't. the rhyming ones are more like songs to me.

Reviews

[Morning Star]

The beauty of our creator painted for us
to enjoy Mother earth we must take care it
your words capture such beautiful intense images
the image of the eagle fling overhead remain in my mind
Brilliant piece!

[Needy]

I like it :)

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only a poet would see all that! Really calming poetry...lovely

[kylie]

This is wonderful! Great details, it made me feel as though I were there...I see what you mean about The Lovely Bones!
Keep up the good work, and your style is absolutely fantastic!

[Brittany W]

The Lovely Bones is an amazing movie and book. Your poem really describes mother nature very well, you did a very good job, impressive work.

[loowzerX]

the lovely bones is awesome, although I dont like the ending of both the book and movie..
this is a good poem. thanks for sharing!

[JaceJordd]

that reminds me of that too, i loved that movie.

[Zachary_James]

great job

[Madame Mystique]

a relaxing and soothing poem, how thankful we should be to our mother Earth for those admirable landscapes of serenity.

Thanks for sharing :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a good poem too. This reminds me of the book from where I am in it. I didn't finish it, but I like it. This poem is great. Thanks for sharing. :)