1 of 2 poems that coexist with my novel "Forbidden". If you have not read my novel (chapters are still being posted) then please go read it after reading these poems. They are meant to entice you.
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The Beast
Within
Inside
I have this aching
An
aching that is not so easy to satisfy
One
that claws at me consistently
Inside
is where it lies
I
beg to wander the wild
To
be free and do as I wish
To
browse the possibilities
By
hunting deer, squirrel, and fish
I
wish to strip off my clothing and to just run
To
strip free of the bonds that tie
I wish
to phase into what I really am, to become a beast
This is a very beautiful, very well written piece of art. It reminds me of a few characters I've read in stories. It's quite interesting how you wrote it. It was a way I wouldn't have chosen, but it's quite good. I like this alot. I'm Reading this before I read your novel, mostly because the title caught my eye. This poem makes me think you are describing someone, or something in your story. Anyways, ignore my ramblings.
OOOO very nice! I REALLY enjoyed this. Again, it's a great partner poem to go with the novel and a bit of foreshadowing, I think. Excellent flow and I enjoyed it immensely! :)
This is a very beautiful, very well written piece of art. It reminds me of a few characters I've read in stories. It's quite interesting how you wrote it. It was a way I wouldn't have chosen, but it's quite good. I like this alot. I'm Reading this before I read your novel, mostly because the title caught my eye. This poem makes me think you are describing someone, or something in your story. Anyways, ignore my ramblings.
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