Southbound Train

We fly through life on a southbound train,

Watching things leave we'll never see again.

But we push through, 

We hold our heads high.

Question the truth,

And forget not to lie.

Never Give Up

Reviews

[Sofia Brun]

Short but amazing in every sense of the word. A lovely reminder to keep trying. Very well done.（＾∀＾）

[SonOfPlunder]

Short but has a lot of impact. Very truthful words..nice job

[julia16]

i love this...good word choice and great meaning

[ZeniaK]

though this is short it is packed full of meaning.

[Sarah]

realy good and very true. :D

[Mockingbird]

excellent metaphor. there is truth in these words. one must not look back, however. everyone lies. we live in a world full of lies, but sometimes we need the lie because the truth hurts. excellent poem.