Outside my Window

Sometimes, I wish I had the guts to kill myself. Other times, I'm glad I don't.

Outside my window
The noose
In my soda
The poison
In my fist
The knife
And I’m ready

In my heart
Your love
In my mind
Your beauty
In my ears
Your words
I can’t do it

In the ground
My grave
In that coffin
A note
On that note
“TTYL”
I’ll talk to you later

At my front door
Death himself
Inside my closet
Demon spawn
Under my bed
Monsters lurk
And, yet, I am safe

In my heart
My love
On my mind
Only you
On my lips
“I love you”
And I mean it

Reviews

[Marina]

Wow. I really like this.

I think that i've definitely had this feeling before. Sometimes there are so many things going wrong and then there's always that one thing that makes you regret thinking about wanting to kill yourself.

This is a really good poem. Very well written. It shows the emotions that one goes through. I really, really like it.

Great write! Awesome read! Thanks for sharing and keep writing!

XxStaySweet,
Marina

Ps. ""TTYL"
I'll talk to you later"

I like that.

[Sasha]

Ecstatic. True feelings flow among these words. You gotta love someone alot to write a poem with this kind of effect!
Unique Rhyme Scheme.
I'm glad you can't kill yourself.

[Secret Addiction]

I seriously just have to say that is one of the most amazing poems I have ever read!! GREAT job!!

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

I love you too.
And I'm mad you can't kill yourself.
There would be no point in anything without you.
I'm glad you can't get me off my mind.
I can't stop thinkin about you either.