Kiss me Thrice

Kiss me once, shame on you

Kiss me twice, shame on me

Kiss me thrice, and it's all over

 

 

That kiss, the first of three

Comforted and cradled me

It helped me to see

That with you, I feel free

 

The second kiss, the one adored

Came quickly, swiftly like a sword

And it indeed was my reward

For making sure you're not ignored

 

The final kiss, the one that killed

Poured love in my heart until it filled

My broken spirit it helped rebuild

And left me breathless, hopeless, thrilled

 

You walked away, left me alone

You stole my breath like it's yours to own

For a moment I thought ((and I must atone))

That I loved you; but love is just a broken bone

 

Author's Note

No lie, this happened, I ran inside ((once I was able to think straight again)) and then grabbed my computer and wrote this.

Reviews

[Adora.xo]

I loved the rhyme scheme, and the choice of words. It was a very touching poem, and painted a beautiful image! =] Good job! I really enjoyed this one!

XXX
Rose

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

Wow thats just awsome, I feel really weird today I dont know why I'm just still a little worried about last night.

[A]

I really liked this! I love your rhyming and the story line. Great piece and very well written :)

[Black Carnival]

I love this poem! :D
Its so cute xD I is jealous of your skills :/
please write more (: