When I Grow Up

A poem written for the 30 Days of Poetry thing in Creative Writing. I'm not really a big fan of this one, but whatever. I like putting stuff up here. ^__^

When I grow up.
When I grow up, I’ll be a child.
When I grow up, I’ll be kind and mild.
When I grow up, my peers will be riled.
When I grow up.

When I grow up, you’ll know my name,
You’ll know my art, you’ll know my fame.
When I grow up, it’ll be my game.
When I grow up.

When I grow up, an Artist I will be.
My drawings and paintings will be do pretty.
And people will come and buy them from me
When I grow up.

When I grow up.
When I grow up, I’ll be an artist.
When I grow up, they’ll be jealous; pissed
When I grow up, childhood will be missed.
When I grow up.

Reviews

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

awsome but u dont have to grow up to get those things lol

[Pepsimax]

very sad when a person grows up and they loose their childhood curiosity, well done.