Daddy, Make it Worse

I wrote this last year, probably. An emotional time for me really... The basic concept still holds true for me and many other kids out there; when I'm down, my dad just loves to kick me.

Daddy my day was horrid, nothing went as planed. My schoolmates teased me; told me I’m no one, Daddy, they told me I’m NO ONE. But I guess you don’t care, no wait, you AGREE. You don’t want to hear about my problems, my life. Cuz the thing you don’t care for; that thing is me. Daddy, make it worse. I’m the underdog now, make me feel like dirt. Daddy, make it worse. It stings right now I know you can make it hurt. Daddy, make it worse, Daddy, make it worse… I don’t know why I waste my time, or why I even try, Talking to someone I know won’t listen to me; Who won’t hear me scream at night, who won’t hear me cry. And I don’t know why I even try to make you comprehend, The way I feel, to come home worried that you’ll scream at me. I don’t know why you yell at me, you used to be my friend… Daddy, make it worse. I’m the underdog now, make me feel like dirt. Daddy, make it worse. It stings right now I know you can make it hurt. Daddy, make it worse, Daddy, make it worse… And if I cry, I cry in vain. And if I scream, I scream in pain. And if I fall, I fall slain, With a bullet in my brain. Daddy, make it worse. I’m the underdog now, make me feel like dirt. Daddy, make it worse. It stings right now I know you can make it hurt. Daddy, make it worse, Daddy, make it worse… And I cry out in pain And I fall in the rain And I try to explain But I scream, “I’m insane!” And it’s all done in vain And my fear is the chain And my loss is your gain And I’m under your reign I’m just going insane So, Daddy make it worse…

Author's Note

Remember, this is old. I find myself to be a much more advanced writer now as compared to then in a whirlwind of depressing emotions.

Reviews

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

Wow I never would have seen that of ur dad but he seems weird to me, thats so fucked up , its ok I'm wont kick u when ur down I will always help u up and give u a kiss. ( I dont think that was relevent but I really am board, ....................The poem was awesome and its shows how u have grown as a poet)

[Fathers Philosoher]

Not bad, I this you express your feelings while with your dad.

[Jamie White]

I'm sorry :( I have issues with my dad too, he cares though, it's just . . different. I don't know I have issue with lots of things I guess . . . hmmm . . .I'm having a bad day :( haha sorry. Nice read (: