A Love Story

The best description is no description. Your interpretation is enough.

Bliss; Embracing the one who has finally re-captured his descending heart.

She came to him in the most unlikely of manners.

So perfect from a distance, so desired and sought after.

Elegance was her atire, and beauty was her poise.

No sign of flaw or blemish. Perfection.~~ To the one who has never known sin, to him sin never existed~~

So close yet so far, the cry of the two, never touched, or held yet could be no closer.

No more than a moment, they finally met, no more needed to make all seem worthwhile.

Time has continued to prolong their gift of unchartered love though perilous it has been.

What love is this?

Anger soothes into affection,

Pain metamorphoses into peace.

Yet, so many questions still remain.

He refuses to let time, friends, situations or anything that may come to sepparate them,

Though in times, she herself questioned.

But fight they did to stay so close and nothing so far has become undone.

Truly he is inlove, but not conventional love. Spiritual love, unending love. Perfect Love.

No one is perfect, both have proven it, yet is it not in the presence of our imperfection love abides?

What credit is it to love another who has no flaws? (I refer to the Holy Book)

How can one claim to love when he doesnt too accept the others stains?

Truly he loves.

The problems continue, the tears have yet to cease,

Yet in the midst of these man made waterfalls, he smiles at her.

Kisses her.

Going home to remenisce.

Such a couple, none can relate to.

Unique and fascinating their relationship.

So begins now the tale of the ongoing glory,

As I close the first chapter to my long lived love story.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Lady V]

Awh................


This poem is great.

Truely he is in love, but not conventional love. Spiritual love, unending love. Perfect love.

That alone made me want to read the whole poem again. So endearing and truthful. You held back nothing and exposed all that one may go through. Men usually do not want go in to depth about Love but you went above and beyond an explanation.

I applaud you. Great piece. Thank you for the read requests.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[Cassandra D.]

This was a very nice piece you have here.

"So close yet so far, the cry of the two, never touched, or held yet could be no closer.
No more than a moment, they finally met, no more needed to make all seem worthwhile."

Wonderfully written.

[Gina]

LOOOOL wow lovely story ..
on line 17 u said "no one is perfect both have proven that"
Your right in life no one is perfect but its about finding that person whos perfect for u, Because wats perfect for u may not be perfect for another..

But nicely worded

[vindictivesunshine]

Whoa dude........whoa. This is a massive piece packed with raw feeling, the way true writing is supposed to be. have felt that much emotion in writing. Awesome.

[BlessedLove]

Great piece. Placing reality in what can be thought of a novel....and it goes on and on...seems to have no end ..great that there's true love involved. All the best.