Blood of the Ancients
A Book by Jeff Jessie
Alone and easily persuaded, Daol Rassi is pulled into a daunting task by a sly shape shifter with a hidden agenda. Will Daol be able to complete this task or will he fall to the power of the Ancients?
© 2012 Jeff Jessie
Author's Note
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Open critique. Mainly setting and whether the dialogue contributes to the story or if it drags it down.
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Added on September 8, 2012
Last Updated on September 8, 2012
Tags: Fantasy, Fiction, Magic
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Jeff JessieClarksville, TN
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My name is Jeff Jessie, I am a 26 year old father of two beautiful girls. Married to my best friend for the past 6 1/2 years and active duty military for the past 8 years. I write as a hobby and it i.. more..
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