Changes

She made me feel like a king she gave her all
I gave love and dedication until my fall
The words she spoke I really needed to hear
I'm dating someone else I've moved on my dear
It's over now and my soul is at peace
I wish her happiness to say the least
I knew it was over but couldn't let go
Now I must move on its time to grow
I must admit I made mistakes from the start
And the pain I feel remains in my heart
The history we shared made it hard to let go
The memories we made continues to flow
Down to earth I loved how she made me feel
She's got a friend for life just keeping it real
I will continue to miss her through every season
But I know in life all things happen for a reason
The impact you've made I will cherish until the end
I wish you well in life I'm gonna miss you my friend

Reviews

[just Penny]

I like this. It's clear and succinct. It explores how relationships evolve. The sense of loss is strong throughout, as is the calm and acceptance. To be friends after a relationship ends can be challenging and it's something I remain wary of. I wonder about the change of pronoun from "her" to "you" and the premise that "moving on" equates to growth as it doesnt always. I have observed an ex evolve into something that I find really unattractive where he has assimilated into the mindset of his new love and become mean spirited, vindictive and devious. But I digress lol. A real, relatable write that gives the reader something to think about. Nicely done. Welcome to the WC :)

[JJ]

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