?

look at me,

what do you see,

but a girl so very happy,

if you take the time,

to read this ryme,

you will see the real crime,

my hearts been torn to peices,

and there is no real thesis,

why my sorrow increases.

Author's Note

im not sure what to name this... any ideas?

Reviews

[nono]

Yeah you could name it look at me cause well it just fits...I really like the is there no real thesis part for some reason. But it's a very cute poem.

[November_Rain]

you could name it "look at me" ^^ but also, GREAT POEM!