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Grandma

Grandma

A Poem by jess
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this poem is about my grandma...

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death is one of the worst of fears,

and when it happens there's sure to be tears,

tears of the memories,

and those of the treasuries,

what was lost and what was gained,

the thoughts of the deceased will remain,

far above the sky and northern star,

that's exactly where you are,

but somtimes it's clear,

that you are so very near,

where you are now near or far,

I love you so much where ever you are.

© 2010 jess


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this is nicely done...i really liked it. i like the
"and those of the treasuries,
what was lost and what was gained,
the thoughts of the deaseased will remain,
far above the sky and northern star,
that's exactly where you are,"
It was a really nice part
but you did spell "deaseased" wrong it's deceased.
not to criticize i hate doing that
But all in all it was a very nice poem

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 24, 2010
Last Updated on July 17, 2010