Dear you.

it was one of those morning that you sit home hoping the day will go well, 

came home from my daily runs ready to get rest for few hrs while thinking what I'll be cooking as my cooking practice for my upcoming cooking show that am working on.

nothing much this evening nothing on television interesting to watch I sat on my little sofa let my body rest,.

slowly I felt asleep like a baby on its crib dreaming 

in my dream I had a letter from unknown to unknown 

And the letter goes like...

Dear You

honestly its surprises me and it take a big toll of me just to see you living under tension. Even that last hour of your day cannot be used.
Am happy to see you here, but I realized that its not something for you, and I am sure being around me its not something that you long for.

I am aware that  you are happy somewhere out there and for long I've been fogging that, as you've been wishing I think may be you are right. This life is too precious to waste with a looser like me.
While there are more fun out there and a lot to learn. I want you to know that I am very proud of you and every decision you make simple to make yourself happy.

Sorry for pushing you away as you always seen, and now am giving you a reason to make if official publicly if you may wish.

Well its not surprise that you didn't care for me as well "as you always say to me that you didn't come to this country to care for someone"
My point was, for long you have been hiding that happiness, and I say now if you ever wish to make it publicly then you may do as you wish

I can't speak anything about love to you or anything good or I don't have any bad word to say to you, as your heart is as solid as rock and for long you have lost your emotions
Then its hard to feel what I feel about all this, that's why to you all this is just time wasting in life when comes to me.

Who tell his lover "go find another lover", who doesn't care of where his lover is. 
Who claims to be yours while when she picks the call up she can't say she is with her men.
Who  claims that you love someone while you not proud of him, you manage to shovel me in the closet enough that you cannot be seen with me in a public "that is smart of you"
And am sure some time you laugh just for thinking of how you play your silly games,

And that's how it wind up back at you and worry if I see another woman out there. And you wonder when I tell you that you are the one who play with gun and snakes, so why should I worry of being bitten by a snake or shot by the gun.
If I ware you or play game that you have been playing for the last four years, yes I would worry and I will take initiative to have me checked to be sure and I keep on doing it as part of my yearly routine.

In another hand I'd like to thank you a lot in my life, I'd have never known such life that you had me experience in the past I've taken love for granted until you. As you have notice lately I've learn how to control and take moments as they come
I thank you for showing me the other color of love that, made me understand those who goes through one like yours. Its good thrill for a fact I don't think if I'd care much for you if you ware other wise,
I don't have a way to pay you back for that time, but only me and my love can be there if you think that worth.

Thank you  and I will always love you and understand you.

Always love you..

I was woken up by a phone call...

Reviews

[Leo TheSaint]

Thanks for you time of correction.. will work on that...

[LeatisGraves]

Okay I can say this is a good effort, but halfway through I was lost as to what exactly was going on, - this isn't a story - it's more like a section of exposition, very confusing exposition.

Now I'm going to be constructive here, and tell you what problems I saw.
First off, your spelling and grammar isn't very good. I understand that people have different styles, but you have sentences that end without a period, and some that do but a new one immediately begins without a capitol. Easily fixed. Though also note that some of your sentences make no sense at all (i.e. 'In another hand I'd like to thank you a lot in my life, I'd have never known such life that you had me experience in the past I've taken love for granted until you.').

Second off, your story (sort of) has no real characters, or area to populate. I know there is such thing as 'keeping it vague' in order to stimulate the imagination but there is quite literally, nothing. This entire section is a void of ideas, which I suppose you could use towards a decent deal of character traits but in this form they aren't very effective, or sad to say, effective at all.

I do expect your a newer writer, and I love to see people exploring their ideas - I do hope you keep trying and maybe eventually you'll be one of the greats - looking back and laughing at me for all I've said here.