The Pessimist

The Pessimist

A Poem by It's Me, The Miracle
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I WOULD LIKE TO TELL ABOUT A PERSON WHO ALWAYS THINKS NEGATIVE THOUGH SITUATIONS ARE RIGHT AND POSITIVE

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This morning was awesome for it bore a lot of excitements

With the best of light, the maiden ray wakened the dawn

Sun seemed to be beatifying with the desire to feed the planet

Though the campaign was dull, the breeze winged with loyalty

Flowers sought for delighting color and aroma to charm the world

Butterflies appeared as if they are committed to someone

Birds sang songs of wisdom and love, with their mellifluous voice

Rivers basked their motility by sparing its water for the banks

Tides appealed with their love as they often paid visits to shores

Yet, I was scared whether I will be able to savor this beauty forever

Fear and despair dragged me back from being happy as always

I, the unfortunate, or unworthy still sit here and shed tears on fate

© 2015 It's Me, The Miracle


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great, i like your intro of the poem that brings the audience to view the wake of the day as a positive experience. then the story evolves, step to step into the idea of pessimism that has a hold of every one in the world but to be able to wake, being refreshed by the world that hasn't crushed us yet but im being optimistic.

over all great job.
thanks.

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It's Me, The Miracle

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend for the great review



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great, i like your intro of the poem that brings the audience to view the wake of the day as a positive experience. then the story evolves, step to step into the idea of pessimism that has a hold of every one in the world but to be able to wake, being refreshed by the world that hasn't crushed us yet but im being optimistic.

over all great job.
thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's Me, The Miracle

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend for the great review

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Added on May 5, 2015
Last Updated on October 12, 2015
Tags: pessimism, beauty, nature, enthusiasm, commitment