What makes you run so fast?

A poem posted on my blog...The link is http://jishajagadeesh.blogspot.com/2011/11/what-is-that-makes-you-run-so-fast.html

 

Oh dear squirrel, what makes you run so fast?

Is your mom there behind you to make you eat?

Is there a maths teacher run after you to teach?

If not, what is that makes you run so fast?

 

Oh dear squirrel, why are you rushing like this?

Have you stolen an edible nut from your brother?

Or are you rushing to meet your new girl friend?

If not, what is that makes you run so fast?

 

Oh dear Squirrel, why are you in a hurry always?

Is your wife in ail as she gives birth to your baby?

Does your daughter look for you to get her protection?

If not, what is that makes you run so fast?

 

Oh dear Squirrel, why do you not answer my question?

I would like to let you know that my heart prays for you

That God please help the squirrel, who is in a hurry

I pray to help it in the reason that makes it run fast

Author's Note

Thank you for reading and Reviewing

Reviews

[Plane Jade]

I couldn't help but pray for the squirrel to find his way. Thank you for the beautiful imagery that you planted in my mind with this sweet piece

[Pradeep Nair]

Nature....!
The blessing bestowed upon us...
and here .. it is exploited to it's full potential..

So realistic...
brilliant visualization.
All praises for you.

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thank you very much

[Pradeep Nair]

most welcome

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The only thing I can figure is its coming a bad winter smiles That was cute I enjoyed that:)

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear friend

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You are Very welcome:)

[Zero_Edge88]

Oh nature and her ways with the way animals are. We are all equal in the eyes of her creation for we are molded not by the way the monkey eats or how the dolphins swim or when cheetahs run at amazing speeds. Rather we are molded to be imperfectly paired to them. After all, we are creatures of our habit as well as the animals that we encounter everyday. Such as this tiny fellow, so beautiful yet so sly only slier is the raccoon or the weasels in the way they move faster.

As to our nature as well, we are of the same mechanism when we see someone we don't like. We lean instinctively into the first option of running! Or more so go into hiding or lastly fighting them! This is what makes us different from the animals right. Though I digress for now as it is the survival part of our life that we make such erratic actions in the first place just like that tiny squirrel for sure.

Thank you my dear and lovely peaceful neighbor :)

[It's Me, The Miracle]

I was looking for you to review this as your reviews includes knowledge in abundance.....Thanks a lot for the great review dear friend.

[Zero_Edge88]

No thank you for the invitation my dear friend. :) I hope you are having a beautiful week so far :)

[It's Me, The Miracle]

hm...true.....I had have a wonderful week....What about you?

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem for nature. The life of animals is interesting. They live to survive. I like the description of the Squirrel. Allowed the reader to fall into the tale. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear Coyote.....I am here after a few days and you welcomed me with a wonderful review....I am overwhelmed...Thanks once again

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[It's Me, The Miracle]

:) :) :) :) :)