What Do They Remember

When thoughts flow over the bed

They don't remember the day when their eyes met first

They don't remember the day when their lips met first

They don't remember the day when they slept together first

Several eclipses passed when they were still on bed together 

They never noticed any of them as they were busy with each other 

The world was jealous as they didn't find time for it

He remembers the day on she shifted to the edge of their bed

she remembers the day on he left their room

They remember the time they parted as the most painful day 

Reviews

[Riding the Rainbow]

Really painful poem but real..Thank you for sharing this piece with us..

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear K

[Mereena]

A great write on passion........good work

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear friend

[Mereena]

A great write of passion....

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear friend

[Suja]

A wonderful piece of writing...I loved it

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear friend

[unbreakable]

I'm obsessed with this poem! amazing

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thank you so much for reviewing my poem

[Zero_Edge88]

Sometimes when I sleep in my bed, I take one side and only that side will be where I lay my head to rest. As to why I do this despite that it's a king-sized bed I don't know. I find myself wondering the person I will be sleeping with will she be the one facing the wall or will she be the one through the door? For I think about the nights coming in and I feel as if she won't be there even though she isn't here already. What a piece of mind for me to think of when I go to bed today. Thank you :)

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot Emmanuel for encouraging me with such an honor.

[koty bell]

Love can be the happiest thing ever... And it can also cut like a knife... This was a great poem ...i loved this very much...it really illustrated the risks of love and what is all worth it...great write

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear Koty

[koty bell]

No prpb... Ive really enjoyed ur writing...keep up the great work