The Tail-end

Self realization of a complete woman !

A better half is the half of a couple

The half with a lot of flaws!!

So do, I became the tail-end of us

Being the tail-end, I forgot how to see

As the head is there to see for me,

he hid my flaw to make me see

Being the tail-end, I forgot how to hear

As the head is there to hear for me,

he hid my flaw to make me hear

Being the tail-end, I forgot how to speak

As the head is there to speak for me,

he hid my flaw to make my voice heard

Being the tail-end, I forgot how to walk

As the head is there to move for me,

he hid my flaw to walk alone in the world

You hid all my weakness to make me better

Called me the better half, though I wasn't

Making it a pleasure being the tail-end

Author's Note

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. It is the flow of an emotion, when I realized myself.... Thank you

Reviews

[Riding the Rainbow]

really good piece, my friend;)

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear friend

[J Todd Underhill]

Well done poetess, and I refer to mine as the better half as well, and knowing what I know about my wife; I can only assume your really are the better half!

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear J.....Your words are like Boost mixed with sweet milk....

[Mereena]

Wife explained in another words

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot mereena

[Suja]

A saga of love and passion

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot suja

[Zero_Edge88]

Wonderful piece for sure! Truly and understandably of two different cultures but a woman should be at equal heads of who we are. For they even as a tail-end must know they have a heart and a wonderful head of thoughts that shine so brightly when we are with them. It is mixed with great emotion for sure and you never write it off as it is completely read in the lines so clearly Beautiful piece, nevertheless. Thank you very much mam :) Have a beautiful rest of your day :)

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot Emmanuel.....Your review is very much constructive.....Thanks a lot

[TheMadnessWithin]

Good poem, the words really seem to flow and i love how the title ties into the theme

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear friend