Random Piece #1

Random Piece #1

A Story by Jin Trigger
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This is an exact copy of a note I wrote on Facebook one day awhile back. Read and it will explain why I did it.

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Ok so I go on this site full of generators and i found this one that generates writers challenges. It basically gives you what elements the story includes. So since I'm bored imma try to do one every day/week and you guys can rate my stories. I might do a comedy here or there but most of my stories will be suspenseful and/or actiony.

Today's challenge [The story is set during a concert. The story takes place in the morning. During the story, a relative shows up]..........OK here we go

Me and Sagirus went to Rami's concert expecting to find Kyle there. Kyle had something of ours and we wanted it back at any cost.
"Hey Genos. Do you really think he is here," Sagirus said in a condescending way, "I mean it's only eight in the morning. Shouldn't he be in bed. Anyway who goes to a concert this early anyway. That's retarded."
"He'll show up and plus this was an all nighter concert," Genos responded, "This will all be over in like three hours...but we gotta find Kyle before then."
"I see.....So he must be a fan of this concert?"
"Nah....He can hide easily in these crowds," Genos commented, "I mean the Wet Demons are internationally known......There are people all over the world here just for tonight to see this one band."
"Wow.....Thats popularity for ya," Sagirus laughed as he saw someone in a grayish brown
robe, "Hey isn't that Kyle?"
"Sure is.....That b*****d," Genos said pulling out his twin auto reloading revolvers pointing it at the crowd Sagirus pointed to, "THERE YOU ARE YOU THEFT!!!"
Genos began to shot without any regards to who was getting hit as long as Kyle got hit and he got what he wanted. Kyle began to run as soon as he noticed two young men next to him getting shot in the head.
"Oh no you don't.....I love a chase," Sagirus said as he drew his katana and began to chase after Kyle slicing anyone who got in his way.
Kyle, unlike his chasers, did not want to harm the innocents and because of that moving through the now panic heavy crowd was difficult with a mass killer behind him. Kyle had no choose but to draw his twin blades and fight. He really wanted to avoid a fight but it was the only way. As Kyle ran toward Sagirus, Genos continued to shot at him. Kyle was able to deflect the bullets with his blades. Eventually Kyle's blades met with Sagirus and the clashing of blades begun. Sagirus was slashing with his blade like a madman, no form or balance but even still the disciplined Kyle was being over power, espicially with a gunman shooting him down.
"Give it up Kyle and just give us what we want," Sagirus said as his blades got deadlocked with Kyle
"No can do buddy," Kyle said in his smart-aleck tone he always used,"You seem to be enjoying yourself and I don't want to ruin it for you is all."
"Ah forget you.......Ah crap," Sagirus said as he broke the deadlock with Kyle, "Genos we got trouble."
"I see..........Why are you here," Genos asked a descending figure as he put down his guns.
"I see your still chasing poor Kyle," said the figure with wings landed,"Now can't you leave brother alone for two minutes so we can complete an assignment?"
"Your always taking up for him Reno," Sagirus yelled as he withdrew his blade,"That's not fair!!!"
"It's very fair.....Leave the kid alone," Reno said as he looked at Kyle,"He doesn't realize what he is doing...............but soon enough he will and when he does.....He'll come to us."
"Thats what you said about Seraph," Genos said in a disgusted tone, "Now he is out forming an army to take us out."
"Which won't happen....Just do as I say and go back to headquarters," Reno commanded as he took flight.
"Be lucky brother Kyle........Reno won't come to save your life again," Sagirus said in a menacing tone as he and Genos took flight.
Kyle has evaded the Arch again and this time it was pure luck. Who would come after him next and why does the Arch keep calling him brother. Kyle didn't know the weapons he held would bring so much trouble. He wanted peace but that wasn't happening. He didn't want war which is the prime reason he didn't want to seek out Seraph, but now does he really have a choose? Kyle made a promise to his grandpa and at all means he needed to keep it. Kyle decided maybe war was necessary. It was time for him to move again and this time the move would take him to Lord Seraph. Kyle looked at the dead bodies in the empty concert grounds. It made him mad and sad. Kyle needed to make a move and he would make it soon....
THE END


Did you like it? I bet you wanna know what happens next. Too bad it's just a one timer. No more Kyle or Genos though I did like their characters. I loved Sagirus. Everything you read here was straight off the dome. I just started and kept going. So tell if you like it as I did keep within the challenge guidelines

© 2009 Jin Trigger


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Added on October 4, 2009

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Jin Trigger
Jin Trigger

Montgomery, AL



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Hello, my name is Jin Trigger. I love to write and draw. I'm very passionate about literary stuff. I like to rap and write lyrics and work on small projects in my spare time. I have an unnatural love .. more..

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