The Rusty Gate

The Rusty Gate

A Poem by jinjahman
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the idea that things look like they've stalled or got old etc. but that newness on the other side is all too good to discount, despite niggling doubts to the contrary.

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The rusty gate
a reminder
of time
and things past.

The liquid gold 
around your neck
an oily bird in 
Phoenix-resurrection mode
walking through fire
hung off desire!

A sun blistered spoilt coil
signalling cavernous passage
through a hall of mirrors
locked on your gaze;
pall caught by shuddering foil.  

The rusty gate 
itself a transformer 
from underworld lustre
bespeckled in ruby drips
of organic matter
to
the world above where
I stand and wait
at the gate
for you

© 2011 jinjahman


Author's Note

jinjahman
antidote for wrusty riting!

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Ooooooh! I love the oily bird in phoenix resurrection.... inspired imagery there.
Yes!! The journey to dark places and back, with you waiting at the gate.... Do I like? Indeed, I do.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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jinjahman
jinjahman

Ireland



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I've written songs and poems since basic maturity emerged from youth. I'm driven by reminiscence and reflection, youthful endeavours and changing realities of life. I try to explore the lexicon of th.. more..

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