Lets Pretend

I just want one night with you, to make me feel whole

I just want one night with you, your perfect crimson lips upon my ravaged soul

One moment, to inhale your masculine beauty

Rising and falling on pure satin sheets of unity

Slipping and sliding

Come together as one

 Whispering words of regrets and forgiveness

I shall paint them over with sweet and delicate kisses

I just want one night with you, to dissolve inside your arms

Just one night with you to pretend this inevitable end will never come

And when the dawn breaks I will wake to the glow of your sun kissed skin

And ask for just a few more moments with a love so free of sin

Reviews

[GTVile]

Yeah, concur. Very romantic and well-spoken phrasings. Pretty much freakin' awesome.

[bluessadmood]

Ohh what sweet words ..one night with you
will make me forget.my whole world around
every inch in me needs crave for your touch
i want to escape all realty ,you make feel like living another life
i always dreamed of but never thought i could feel
we will mingle together slide along onto each others mind
you have such strange ways,its like feeling mad with you
i lose all senses i was used to..its a very strange feeling
you always take me far,to never lands,and only you could bring me back
without you i will be lost forever..its you who will do all the work,juorney me to lands of sin
lovely write..

[Silvario]

I'm liking your style as I really enjoyed this piece. Smooth and fluid and very well written. You send a powerful messege in a short, soft, somewhat alluring and very creative manner.

well done indeed :)

[Dream Weaver]

Your words soft and true to the heart,
flowed effortlessly with each line fusing
with the next, Nicely done.

[Antonio Valentino]

What a romantic you are. This was lovely, thank you for sharing it with us.

Antonio

[Ian]

A real romantic poem that was worth enjoying this poem is something i never read before great job

[alan khan]

ahh. i felt his poem.

Whispering words of regrets and forgiveness
I shall paint them over with sweet and delicate kisses

such a good line. awesome work.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a longing... a deep, loving desire found flowing through your words... wanting something... someone who is just beyond your grasp.. The beauty of the love described here and your honest voice bring about the most wonderful write... Amazing...