just a thought

just a thought

A Poem by Jillian Alexis
"

this is now a tattoo on my back

"

Beautiful things fall apart

Imagine what will happen next

Our Hearts capacity becomes vulnerable

And In Moments of Joy and Sorrow

These Memories in perfect ugliness

Are Never to be erased...

© 2010 Jillian Alexis


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There was such a feeling of sadness that came over me here... the first line struck me deep. Your flow moves us into thoughts that ever linger in the heart and mind. Powerful, emotional words!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This reminded me of the Megan Fox tattoo,
"there
once was
a little
girl who
never knew
love until
a boy
broke her
HEART"

I don't have any tattoos, but I am a bigger fan of exerts and quotes, than actually say something, as opposed to a picture which has to be explained to the onlooker.

Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


You said so much in so few words. Your statements are true. I like the complete poem. Ending was very good.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is wonderful, Simple and well stated!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2009
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"All the suffering of this world arises from a wrong attitude. The world is neither good or bad. It is only the relation to our ego that makes it seem the one or the other." more..

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