silent shouting

a short story by non writer who is just exploring herself from good and bad situations , who just wants to shout out loud and tell people or say ask is she correct or not?, is her pain worth or not ?

Jenny , Jenny was born in in the small industrial city of Gujarat, Morbi. The place which was marked on the map just for marking , whose development was based on the mentality and will of the businessmen , place where the buildings developed but the minds of the people stayed where it was. The place which had tremendous amount of money but did not have that attitude to spend those money. In such a town a girl with broad mentality , a girl who had a bold and very different view point , girl who did not feel sitting with boys a punishment but an opportunity to make new friends. she grew up as a strong girl with will power and attitude to conquer the world with her positiveness and attitude. years and days passed and one day she got the news her father passed away , and her life took 360 degree turn in twenty four hours. she was taken to her uncle's house with her mother and lil brother who had seen nothing yet. her mom started working to make her kids study in the best school of the town with the confidence that her kids are safe with her uncle but who knew behind the back the girl with positive attitude was going to be torn apart , her soul is going to get destroyed, who knew this! everyday her mom used to go out to work hard for her chil's better future and everyday that small girl used to try to safeguard herself from the monstrous uncle that used to visit her place and tear her soul apart every day , slowly and gradually the girl lost her childhood and got the maturity when she kept her mouth shut just for the family reasons , just for her mother , just for not being the reason of the fights in the family. two years later came an angel as father in her life she felt , this time she wont have to face those things but her hopes were destroyed as that monstrous uncle visited her frequently and tore her soul apart , never missed a chance to come close to her ,say it elevators or family trips his eyes used to rip her off! she got so scared that her dreams haunted her, her fantasies turned nightmares and a soft spoken girl became bold , loud and with terrible strong attitude yet somewhere lied a ray of positivist in her but she needed love and help and in high school she found that . Her best friend who became his love gave her that hopes but typical Indian parents did not allow that , they thought a girl  having boyfriend is a crime, it would smack down their sop called status and ijjat and she had to leave that friend and her soul again turned into pieces and that girl now became so rude and blunt that she did not care of anyone and anything except her mom , then she met a girl of her age but with totally different attitude her name was Ahana, Ahana was totally a different personality than Jenny. where Jenny loved playing rough games Ahana did not like being that rough with herself , Where Ahana had colors in her clothes jenny loved wearing blacks and whites ,gradually these girls became the best of friends and their bond became unbreakable , lot of people tried to break their friendship but everyone failed, they went to another city to study there both the girls found what they were seeking for, fir a long time and the only thing they wished for in common and that was freedom to take their own decisions , year and half passed jenny turned 20 and found a match for her who broke all those walls and taught her what love actually is , he taught jenny that she is beautiful and she need to come over her past and start fresh, slowly she was able to sleep peacefully at nights , Ahana no longer had to struggle hard to calm her down in the nights , but again the parents of jenny forced her to leave that guy, again she was forced to make choice between her studies and the one who helped her gain the inner peace back but this time jenny decided to fight for herself and lied to her parents that she will not talk to that guy again, but the cost she had to pay for this was upset parents which she could not take it and she left talking to her , now she has everything , a normal routine life , happy parents , success but does not have inner peace and a smile from heart . 

Author's Note

ignore the grammar mistakes , but what do you think what jenny did was correct ? and how was the story line . as this is my first writing .