confused!

too much of drug is a poison

too much of love a curse

too much of dreaming is a faded reality

like mud & water mixed in a flagon

too much of care is anger

too much of expectation is fear

too much of feeling is a noodled soup

there's no way out,once poured together

too much of silence is deaf

too much of words is confusion

too much of thoughts is a sudoku box

lost perceptions of life

whatever remains,is the one called belief

in the habit of treating life as a courtroom

you keep on trying to find the best

if the average can also do well

why perfection is a greed & man wants to test??

Author's Note

looks weird & a bit confusing.the first & last line in a para compliment each other!! see,if you can create something out of it :)

Reviews

[Siddhartha]

Its a cautionary tale about the excesses of our materialistic life and how in always living in the fast lane, we have forgotten the joy of being contented with what we have. Nicely done Shona...:)