bachpan bachpan!

Aaj phir kahin khoyi huyi yaadon me..

Muskurane ko karta hai mann…

Chand ko adha sa dekha upar..

Chalakta ye usme mera bachpan…

Choti choti baaton pe wo ladai..

Bhai k secrets padkar uski khichai..

Ghar k piche chupi jhadiyon se..

Chupkar chote kutto ko uthana..

Apne khane me se thoda sa bachana..!!!!

Kuch pal ab bhi..waise hi hai,,jaise lipte ho mere bachpan ki band kitabo me..

Bas those dur se hai..chhune k ehsaas bhar se jee uthte hai mere khwabo me..

Aaj yuhin wahin dhun gungunane ko mann kiya..jo dekha mere pyare se chand ko upar…

sanjoye hai mere yaadon ki tasweero ko,kal subah ye phir chup jayegi…

Reviews

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Yeah... Its very beautiful, Lovely writing... I enjoy whole poem...its in Hindi.... Keep it up... God bless you!

[St.Jimmy]

Wow this my first experience with a hindi poem here,very well written

You could use more of 'Alankaars' (poetic devices) to beautify it

Keep up the good work :)

[msharma]

a nostalgic pen picture.

[pratishtha]

aaawww miss this bachpan.. wish i could get it back....
thanx for once again taking us to these lovely me,ories...

[Mehul Rwat]

It would be better if you write in english(even though i know hindi too).

[Akshat♥]

I loved it!!
mujhe bahut ache lage ye poem..
you have expressed your feelings from your heart..
I can clearly feel that:)
Keep writing hindi poems..i will surely read it all:)
This one is going to my favorites ...

[Awesome Emily]

what language is this?