A lonely girl

SItting on her bed, this young and beautiful girl was crying. She was crying because she was in darkness. She didn't know how to get out of the darkness except by one person. The boy she liked was the only person that could pull her out of the darkness. She tried talking to him but he ignored her, she tried e-mailing him but once again he ignored her, then she tried messenger and he responded but then all of a sudden he just went away all over again. She cried and screamed but it didn't seem to help. The one guy that she trusted was gone from her. She kept telling herself that there will be others but she doesn't have the heart to believe it...she tells herself that she just wants him because she felt comfortable. Even right now while she is typing this her heart is aching but she can't fix it. She is becoming  a girl who doesn't know what to do with life, who think s that life is useless and can be meaning less at times. While sitting here she hears bells but she can't figure out where the bells are coming from, she hences that they are near but when she looks for them, she doesn't see them. 

 

This girl is someone who is just starting to see light because of one of her best friends and she is starting to like this guy and she is starting to get happy but to the point where she can feel like a 19 year old. She claims she isn't going to get together with this guy that she likes only because he's 6 hours away. Now she is having second thoughts about it. 

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

you did a good job...i really felt the frusteration that the girl went through...but there is always someone that will be perfect for us...we just have to have the heart and faith to wait for them to come in our lives.
Great Job :)

[jumbie's #1 fan]

This is good. I like how it's not all complicated and metaphorical...? (Hopefully that's a word), but is really to the point. Poor girl, we've all been there.

[Crazy Cat Man]

Interesting piece.........this girl should obviously move on from this guy :) great piece

[Windy]

I'm not a critic by any means but... it seems like there should be a break in there somewhere, maybe between her being so sad and down and then starting to come out of it?? Otherwise, it started out so sad but I'm glad near the end it seemed to be going to have a happy ending after all. :)