^^ This is a nice poem, it is short, but it says all it really needs to. Nothing in this world can ever compare to God, He is the only one who can fill the hole inside our hearts. I like how you named all of who He is, and even those don't come close to all that He is, it would take forever to describe exactly how God is and what He means to us, and even if we do take time to write everything He does or has done for us, we will always discover more things He is doing in our lives!
Great Job
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind review! Yes, He is the only one who can fill those holes! Thank you, and y.. read moreThank you for your kind review! Yes, He is the only one who can fill those holes! Thank you, and yeah, it would take forever to describe exactly how God is and what He means to us, and then there would still be more!
^^ You're welcome! yeah that actually reminds me of a poem I wrote not to long ago xD like yesterday.. read more^^ You're welcome! yeah that actually reminds me of a poem I wrote not to long ago xD like yesterday, but I still haven't had the time to post it! lol Yes it would take forever but it is amazing to see how much God can touch a life! You're very welcome!
Dude... the rhyme scheme here is like perfecto! And the message is equally great! I love it :D
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thanks so much! :) part of it came to me during a church sermon and the rest late at night! Glad you.. read moreThanks so much! :) part of it came to me during a church sermon and the rest late at night! Glad you like it! Thanks for the review! :D
8 Years Ago
That is often how mine come about too! You're very welcome :)
I'm Muslim but I find this piece very beautiful! I love Jesus too!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for your review! Yes, without Jesus, we would have nothing because He is everything! Tha.. read moreThank you for your review! Yes, without Jesus, we would have nothing because He is everything! Thank you for giving this a read!
Short but sweet! So much meaning put into just a few words. Honestly, this could be a song, the flow and words are amazing. Excellent write. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for your review! I wanted to convey a lot, without being too long! And thank you again f.. read moreThank you for your review! I wanted to convey a lot, without being too long! And thank you again for your review! :)
^^ This is a nice poem, it is short, but it says all it really needs to. Nothing in this world can ever compare to God, He is the only one who can fill the hole inside our hearts. I like how you named all of who He is, and even those don't come close to all that He is, it would take forever to describe exactly how God is and what He means to us, and even if we do take time to write everything He does or has done for us, we will always discover more things He is doing in our lives!
Great Job
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind review! Yes, He is the only one who can fill those holes! Thank you, and y.. read moreThank you for your kind review! Yes, He is the only one who can fill those holes! Thank you, and yeah, it would take forever to describe exactly how God is and what He means to us, and then there would still be more!
^^ You're welcome! yeah that actually reminds me of a poem I wrote not to long ago xD like yesterday.. read more^^ You're welcome! yeah that actually reminds me of a poem I wrote not to long ago xD like yesterday, but I still haven't had the time to post it! lol Yes it would take forever but it is amazing to see how much God can touch a life! You're very welcome!
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