AWAKEN ME

A poem about a girl who is waiting for her lover to come back.

      AWAKEN ME'
         by;KHICKS




                          Sometimes,I feel like just existing and not really living
                          I'm only waiting for the time you'll come back,
                          I've forgotten who I am in you,
                          I'm not who you meant me to be,
                          Cause your drifting away from destiny.
          
                          Awaken my heart,awaken my mind,
                          Awaken the passion to live for you my love,
                          Awaken me,my soul is longing,my heart is searching,
                          I'm desperate for you,still I'm waiting,
                          Give me another chance to see you in a glance,
                          I'm crying out to you,it's not what I meant to do,
                          Cause I wanna be with you.
                             
                          Awaken my heart;awaken my mind,
                          Open my eyes so I can see your presence dwelling inside,
                          Wake me up,cause I can't live another minute,
                          Without you by my side.

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

So wonderful and heartfelt and so beautiful and honest. I can feel the emotion and longing in every line,

[Jess]

yeah Sir,it was written when I'm on the stage of moving on...but now,,I don't want to wait anymore!!!I'm tired

[Ahmad Cox]

Hug. Sometimes letting go can be harder than we think but sometimes it can be just as easy as allowing yourself to truly let go of the frustration and pain of the past and see and understand that you are exactly where you need to be at this very moment and God wants to heal all wounds and scars if you lean on him and pray in earnest.

[Jess]

,thanks for the word of comfort Sir,,yeah your right,,ahm bye the way Sir,i gotta keep going,i have my next class,,thanks for the time..

[zainul]

Love your yearning.
Well penned.

[Jess]

thank you Sir.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,lovely poetess.

[Jess]

:))Is that you in your photos?

[zainul]

Yes,it is.
Do you like it?

[Jess]

You look like my granny:)

[zainul]

I feel very honored,Khicks.
Thank you very much.
Please tell me more about your granny.
What are you doing now?
I knew from your about me that you from Philippine.

[Jess]

Can I call you Grandad,Sir?If it is okay with you.
yeah,I'm a Filipino and It's more fun here in the Philippines:)

[zainul]

Yes,you can call me Grandad.
Could you send me a little biography and a photo of your Grandad in my mail?

[Jess]

I'm sorry Grandad but I have no photo of my grandfather,,
I'm not with him now because he is living in an island and i am studying here in the capital city of the Philippines,,,We are far from each other,and I'm longing for his presence:(

[Jess]

bye the way Grandad,I'm here inside our university library,,It is here where I can use computer because I have none in our home..We're just living in a simple life.,not able to purchase a computer set,

[zainul]

Well,grand daughter,don't worry.
Send me one photo taken by mobile camera when it is possible.
What is the name of the island where he lives now and what is his age now?

[Jess]

Rapu-Rapu Island,ahmm he is now 88 years old..he was a retired veteran soldier during the Japanese Period

[zainul]

Thank you grand daughter.
You are a lovely flower.
I love your writes.

[Jess]

thanks Grandad...bye the way i gotta keep going,I have my next class,,thank you for the time grandad.,,Keep in touch

[zainul]

You are most welcome,sweet gd.
Go to the class and write a poem on Grandad tonight to post it here tomorrow.
OK?

[lee von cleef]

a compliment to you ,get on and do, if he can't keep up you'll find another.

[Jess]

thank u,,i appreciate it,,

[cathy]

nice khicks . ... keep up the good work ... .