Prologue

PROLOGUE

 

A soft kiss was placed on my lips as I was pulled closer. I snaked my arms around his waist and pressed closer to him, kissing him with a passion. His hands slid up, cupping my face gently. My eyes closed as we kissed lustfully. I always felt safe and secure with Cade. He was my first boyfriend, I had been very wary on the subject of dating. Six years ago today, I never would've imagined where I would be now without him. Life has an amazing way of taking you in the right path if you choose to follow its best options. I had had a traumatic life, I couldn't trust a soul. Cade was different. I knew from the moment I met him that I could trust him with my life. Most would say that love at first sight is fraudulent, not real. I used to agree, but now, all that has changed. I'm no longer a hypocrite on the matter. I believe with every inch of my soul that this is real.

 

Feeling the touch of his gentle hand caressing the side of my face, I opened my pale blue eyes and stared into his amber depths. The soft fire that always appeared to burn in his irises intensified as a smile broke out on his face. I loved that smile, and to think I'm the reason he smiles. I'm sure my smile was as genuine as his, this was our moment. I had never loved him more than I do at this very moment. Our wedding. I was oblivious to the crowds of people; family and friends of ours sitting in the pews of the church; watching us as the extravagant ceremony ended and Cade kissed his bride. Me. I'd never had to use so much restraint ever before in my life to stop myself from diving back in for another kiss. That could wait for our honeymoon when it was just us two and no one else. For now, I forced myself to ignore the want and enjoy simply holding his hand and being able to stare into his eyes.

 The crowd exploded into cheering and clapping, my oculars flitted about the room as I took in all the smiles and felt the aura's of happiness radiating through the air around me. This made me even more pleased. We loved each other and had everyone's approval, it had been a rough ride for each of us, but now it seemed everything was finally at peace. We could relax and enjoy the rest of our lives together. I breathed a deep sigh of relief. Today couldn't be more perfect. My thoughts traveled back to our hard journey to this day, all of our fights and hardships, leading up to the present. Beginning at the first time we met. As Juniors in High School.

Author's Note

Here is the Prologue. Not too exciting but a story has to start somewhere.

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Well, you have a good concept, I suppose, but really, you ought to go back over this with an eye for passivity - there's quite a lot of it in this and it makes the piece rather unappealing to read. There's a few grammar mistakes here and there as well, but nothing too major. Another thing I'd suggest would be to shorten this a bit - it's a prologue, and there's a bit too much information in it, I think. The prologue ought to whet the reader's palate, so to speak, and get them interested in the actual story, but I think it's a mistake to have so much exposition.

[jheetah]

I appreciate your input, put this prologue is relatively short... like super super super short compared to one in an actual novel. And there is a lot of exposition because there is a lot to get a basis on in order for the story to make sense. :) And I went back through and fixed some spelling errors, though I probably missed a few mistakes, can you tell me where the mistakes are?

[Felicity's Eve]

Thanks again for the message and I plan to send you a friend request right after this because you are an amazing writer. :)

Love, love, LOVE the plot line and the description you put in the A/N on the Table of Contents is very relatable. I'm scared of love as well. :/

I absolutely ADORE your writing style! The flow and articulation is perfect and the way you write is just magical. :D Gave me goosebumps!!! >.<

I read your profile, too and I love role play. I use my characters from my book 'Casonia' :3

Can't wait to get to know you and to read the next chapter of this!!!

Hugs and luck! :D

100/100

[jheetah]

Thank you!
The comment made me feel amazing, no one has ever commented on my writing style before. I thought I sucked >.< Cuz I'm not very good with big words or detail, but I try my best. :D

And I LOVE roleplaying, its my life. haha. Its all I do.

[Felicity's Eve]

You don't suck!!! You're AWESOMENESS!!! :D

[jheetah]

Yeah dawg~ =D I be awesome.

[Felicity's Eve]

:D