Isolation

Isolation

A Poem by jhed


Isolation

 

Looking through the window pane,

Oblivious of the endless pain.

 

Watching couples as they walk together,

Wishing the story would last forever.

 

Hoping to have that happily ever after,

But sooner realizing the story will soon falter.

 

Fighting to revive that sad story,

Wishing you could’ve just said you’re sorry.

 

Time is passing and you want to move on,

You’re thinking it’s complicated but you’ve got no reason.

 

Now you’re feeling hatred inside your heart,

Imagining he’d cry with you in the dark.

 

But everything you thought didn’t fall to place,

You’re sick and tired running around that maze.

 

Now you stopped fighting for that sad story,

And now thanking you didn’t say you’re sorry.

© 2011 jhed


Author's Note

jhed
Thanks to Kenneth the Geek for suggesting the title and so as to the others who suggested. You're all awesome!!! so there you have it. hope you like it! (oh, also tell me those wrong spelling and grammars!)

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I think "Isolation Windows" would be cool, but I looove this poem, because I can really relate to it, and it's going into my favorites. I love the picture to, it fit in sooo perfectlly, it felt like you were litterally writing about that girl, because her body language and facial expressions fit in perfectlly eith your words. And I love it. Just amazing (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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full of emotion and heartbreak, nice job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i THINK THAT THIS IS BEAUTIFUL THE WAY YOU CAPTURED THE ESSENCE OF ISOLATION...THE PHOTO SPEAKS VOLUMES TO COMPLIMENT WITH THE WORDS HELLO AND WELCOME TO MY WORLD I AM BABy

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is awesome, as usual. Happy to have read this. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very sad but very truthful at the same time. I love how you wrote this. Excellent job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is really good ad heartfelt. very sad, and true. 100

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very sad and heartfelt write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol well i loved it that is how summer feels right now to me i can relate to this very much keep writing !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love the way you rhyme the poem...it made the flow more smooth!
i would say a heart felt poem and a lost love which still cannot be overcome!
an excellent poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


"Wrong grammars" is improper grammar.
Anyway, you could title it "Window Left Unsealed." I don't know if it makes sense to you or not, but to me it does.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jhed
jhed

manila, Philippines



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