Isolation

Isolation

 

Looking through the window pane,

Oblivious of the endless pain.

 

Watching couples as they walk together,

Wishing the story would last forever.

 

Hoping to have that happily ever after,

But sooner realizing the story will soon falter.

 

Fighting to revive that sad story,

Wishing you could’ve just said you’re sorry.

 

Time is passing and you want to move on,

You’re thinking it’s complicated but you’ve got no reason.

 

Now you’re feeling hatred inside your heart,

Imagining he’d cry with you in the dark.

 

But everything you thought didn’t fall to place,

You’re sick and tired running around that maze.

 

Now you stopped fighting for that sad story,

And now thanking you didn’t say you’re sorry.

Author's Note

Thanks to Kenneth the Geek for suggesting the title and so as to the others who suggested. You're all awesome!!! so there you have it. hope you like it! (oh, also tell me those wrong spelling and grammars!)

Reviews

[CharlesMonroe]

I think "Isolation Windows" would be cool, but I looove this poem, because I can really relate to it, and it's going into my favorites. I love the picture to, it fit in sooo perfectlly, it felt like you were litterally writing about that girl, because her body language and facial expressions fit in perfectlly eith your words. And I love it. Just amazing (:

[maryjaneuy]

I love this Jhed. :)
Almost everyone can relate to this. :)

[rielovella]

hi jhed! how's college? i miss you and our section...

anyways,. your poems are so great! i hope i can write also poems that are good like yours.

Isolation is indeed the perfect title for this piece, it gets the reader ready for what the poem is about. I adore the rhyming in this piece, it flows really well.

[Sukriti Suki]

This is a very nice write. I like the rhyme as well. A thought out nice write.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fear that grips most of us, well done, great read.

[Ry]

Is it still untitled or is it called Isolation? Because Isolation is a perfect title for this. I love the imagery and the feeling used in this. Great job =)

[TheElfPrincess]

A lovely poem. The title is very good. Wonderful and I loved it.

[Tasha]

I like the title as it is and you couldn't have picked a better picture. I loved this, it was sad and heartfelt. You are just truly talented. It was amazing.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[TheMizFit]

I think Isolation is a good title already! Very nice poem. I love it. :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautiful Poem!!