Isolation

Isolation

 

Looking through the window pane,

Oblivious of the endless pain.

 

Watching couples as they walk together,

Wishing the story would last forever.

 

Hoping to have that happily ever after,

But sooner realizing the story will soon falter.

 

Fighting to revive that sad story,

Wishing you could’ve just said you’re sorry.

 

Time is passing and you want to move on,

You’re thinking it’s complicated but you’ve got no reason.

 

Now you’re feeling hatred inside your heart,

Imagining he’d cry with you in the dark.

 

But everything you thought didn’t fall to place,

You’re sick and tired running around that maze.

 

Now you stopped fighting for that sad story,

And now thanking you didn’t say you’re sorry.

Author's Note

Thanks to Kenneth the Geek for suggesting the title and so as to the others who suggested. You're all awesome!!! so there you have it. hope you like it! (oh, also tell me those wrong spelling and grammars!)

Reviews

[CharlesMonroe]

I think "Isolation Windows" would be cool, but I looove this poem, because I can really relate to it, and it's going into my favorites. I love the picture to, it fit in sooo perfectlly, it felt like you were litterally writing about that girl, because her body language and facial expressions fit in perfectlly eith your words. And I love it. Just amazing (:

[Veronica Chandler]

Such an imaginative piece; I sincerely enjoyed the read. The Idea of watching life, and people go by, and imagining happily ever after is such a good basis for the piece. Keep up the beautiful work.
And please accept my apologies for not getting to your review till now, I have been away from the Cafe' for a long time.

[quinfinn]

it had been so long since i saw your name on here that i thought you had vanished from this site. i am pleased to see that you are still here and still writing vibrant and stunningly beautiful poetry. this was very close to my heart, as i have been through these feelings and seen this path before. well written prose!

[Hippy]

interesting for sure and i like how the picture really ties into it. i thought that this line

"Time is passing and you want to move on,
You’re thinking it’s complicated but you’ve got no reason."

was just really awkward, maybe because it didnt go with the rhyming of the rest of the piece but i think because it went out of time than the other lines.

[Huggy Bear]

Great piece:)

[Desmund Tiny]

I love this poem with emotions that flows smoothly in each words and the rhyme also.... nice write

[realmwriter]

I think there are a lot of us out here that can relate to this piece, I know I am one of them. Been feelin pretty isolated here lately so I know exactly what you mean! Last line is a typo "thanking" shouldn't that be thinking?

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Oh the many regrests we have as vulnerable humans...living with our regrets...but knowing I'm sorry is never too late to be spoken

[Niki Wilson]

Well, I love this, and I defnitely can relate to this :P
Loving it..
~ClaraQuinn:)

[Richard Williams]

A gently sounding poem that captured the title so well. Nice write.