Nature's About to Bloom... Almost.

Nature’s About to Bloom... Almost.

 

Trees, flowers and fresh air

Everything, scarce.

 

Had been weary for a dogwood

But has been optimistic about its life.

 

You want to reach the apex

Of this mountain you’re about to climb.

 

But never had the guts

To share the emptiness you feel inside.

 

The nature’s about to bloom...

Almost.

 

Oblivious people wandering around

But nothing good to do about.

 

On the list, nature’s always been on queue

But have you reached it?

 

Water, ocean, fishes and reef

How beautiful to see.

 

Dolphin and whales,

Lingering in the sea.

 

Reefs in the ocean,

Oh, how lovely could it be?

 

The nature’s about to bloom...

Almost.

 

Frolicking over the greenest grass,

Trashes scattered.

 

Cloning non-stop on its soft surface,

Oh, how I hope we could subdue.

 

Storms, typhoons and tsunamis

Something sinister is about to happen.

 

Shivering by the cold brought by nature,

Distraction unearthed what have been wrong.

Serene and tranquilizing,

The earth has been an amazing gift to us.

 

But the humanity did something,

Which outraged the nature.

 

Mother Nature has something clever,

And leaves the people unaware.

 

Wistful of how to solve the problem,

They see the earth, tangled.

 

The nature’s about to bloom...

Almost.

 

So now I question,

Have you ever knew?

 

Now, I hope.

You make a sane move.

Author's Note

same old, note me of mistakes here..
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Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

And this is were we come to lose ourselfs in the classics

[kdpgrahi]

A good description of thoughts about the beauty around. I appreciate the choice of words. Flow is good and above all an excellent piece of poetry. Well done. Cary on the good work.

[TheElfPrincess]

Truly left me breathless. Another wonderful poem. Made me shed a tear.

[Suzy Q]

"But never had the guts
To share the emptiness you feel inside."
And when you wrote about the ocean... It really got to me. I teared a little. This was just... Beautiful.

[Groovy]

awesome write. Well penned

[brenda]

i like it we should save the earth !:)

[Coyote Poetry]

The rule of man. Have concern for the abuse of land after the deed is done. I like the poem. You went in many directions. The ending is my wish too. Need sanity in our world. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Richard Williams]

A very nice poem, you captured some essentials of nature so well.

[Short.Nerd]

A beautiful nature poem with excellent imagery. Great job :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

A science nature trip of beauty