We're Living in a Fantasy

We’re Living in a Fantasy

I’m standing in the center of the room

Reminiscing all the memories

As we watched and laughed under the moon

It kind of took me by surprise

As you held your hand with mine

Entwining each of our fingers

I look past your eyes

And felt a touch of lie

 

But baby

You know we’re living in a fantasy

You can see how my dreams are crashing down

Whenever I’m in your arms

Looking back at where we were before

And I’ll be

Kissing you goodbye until I finally breathe

‘Cause you know that I can’t even let you go

You know I’ll be back for more

And yeah I know, I know I’m in a fantasy

 

Standing one by one

I can feel you breathe

You took, grab and hold my hand

And escaped in the sea of people

Slowly, I let you fade away

‘Cause I feel, yeah I see

We shouldn’t be together

 

But baby

You know we’re living in a fantasy

You can see how my dreams are crashing down

Whenever I’m in your arms

Looking back at where we were before

And I’ll be

Kissing you goodbye until I finally breathe

‘Cause you know that I can’t even let you go

You know I’ll be back for more

And yeah I know, I know I’m in a fantasy

 

I know deep within

This is my reality

My precious reality

But someone tells me

“This is just a fantasy..”

I should wake up, wake up

And escape this fantasy

 

But baby

You know we’re living in a fantasy

You can see how my dreams are crashing down

Whenever I’m in your arms

Looking back at where we were before

And I’ll be

Kissing you goodbye until I finally breathe

‘Cause you know that I can’t even let you go

You know I’ll be back for more

And yeah I know, I know I’m in a fantasy

 

 

Author's Note

all suggestions accepted. I love reviews! i'll also do the favor!
yeah this is a song.. my first ever written song xD

Reviews

[ivizarx]

I enjoyed the poem overall, and it has lots of power and emotion settled in it I can definitely find. romance exaggerated, using emotions to give way for imagery. I really hate to say, but I was really lost in the flow of the poem, kinda hard to find rhythm for me, but that's purely perspective and it seems many others have accomplished finding the poems natural pace, so nevermind my criticism if you wish and take it with a grain of salt if you may. overall, still really found the poem well written and very appealing. enjoyed it :)

[light and ashes]

Oh its a song..I thought it was a poem..Well either way it is wonderfully written. This is a beautiful bitter sweet poem. Great job.

[Akshat♥]

This fantasy is really nice..i liked this poem a lot..
can be a good song..i can sing it..with a guitar..lol!
make you strong..keep writing poems..you are really good in it..
send me any review request if u want ..
:)

[quinfinn]

very nice indeed. this would make a clever song because of the refrains, well written and deeply moving

[bianca]

wow, this is a nice song. i can feel the feelings you're tying to express. the sincerity is very deep and it would make a very good song for a rock genre. i absolutely love this song.

[quinfinn]

i was going to say that this was definitely a song, and it a damn fine one at that.
you have a way of expressing yourself that is unique and personal. this would make a terrific ballad, although i could envision it being a rock anthem as well. very nicely done, this is outstanding.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

As a singer/songwriter, I agree this is a song and quite a wonderful one at that.

[jhed]

thanks for the reviews... i really appreciate them.

[livinglifeloud]

I love this, the emotion behind it is demonstrated strongly through out the poem. Awesome Job

[Vanny]

This is a very beautifully written song. I cannot believe you are only fifteen years old! Keep up the wonderful work. -S...